Read some more great descriptive writing in this post. As well as the descriptions, check out the illustrations that a classmate added to bring the character to 'life'. Some great writing and awesome artwork :)
Comment on which of the illustrations match up with what piece of writing.
His guy has blonde hair just past his chin. He has blue eyes with green around them. This guy is part snake and part human. His shirt is light blue with a green “S” on it. He wears a beat on this waist, it is gold and red. This guy has green camo pants down to his ankle. His shoes are black Nike shoes. He has a red heart with an arrow threw it on his right arm.
ReplyDeleteShe hissed revelealing her snake tongue and vampire teeth. Tillys crimson hair was tossed around in the rolling wind as she stood in the middle of the forest and wore torn camo shorts a sickly green singlet and leather muddy hiking boots. Her violet eyes stared into the puddle below her looking at the tattoo of a crescent moon on her upper right cheek.
ReplyDeleteThis character is a lemon yellow. He has a tail that looks like a lightning bolt. On his face he has two red dots on either side of his mouth that lightning comes out of. He has a owner called Ash and he sits on Ashs shoulder. This thing goes round fighting other things like him.
ReplyDeleteHe had slightly scruffy white hair. His dark eyes darted around as though they were flies. He was 60 years old and looked unfit but he was actually as fit as someone half his age. Neat, clean clothing was what he wore, it helped make him unsuspicious. The dark navy of his top and the charcoal of his jeans blended perfectly into the shadows. You could see the faint outline of a packet of smokes in his chest pocket.
ReplyDeleteDry, brittle brown hair with purple and blue streaks. Like hair so horrible from over dye and wet straightening. Has pale skin with a lot of makeup that her face looks green. She has a side fringe and she has two bangs of hair at either side of her face.
ReplyDeleteThe character that I'm writing about is a person who was in a movie that is based on the fictional book. This person is 90 years old and quite tall. He has wavy whiteish,greyish hair that he wears in a long pony tail down his back. His smile is warm and welcoming, has a few broken white teeth in his smile. His aqua blue eyes are coverd by bushy whiteish, greyish eveybrows. The old, ancient, patchwork robes that come down to his ankles,sway in the breeze as he walks through his school grounds slowly and carefully. His whiteish, greyish beard hangs in a loose pony tail at his stomach. He was killed by 1 of his students.
ReplyDeleteHis wrinkly cheeks sagged over his face, making him look a bit like a bulldog. His menacing eyes were bloodshot and tired, as if he hadn’t slept in weeks. Under is smooth, egg shaped head lied a sea of wrinkles from tireless stress and old age. He wore an old scruffy striped shirt with stains all over it, and trendy brown leather pants for people aged 85+. He bent his neck retardedly when he walked , kinda like a retard, and he looked a lot like one of those dwarves on Snow White and the Seven Dwarves because he so was short and chubby.
ReplyDeleteHis greasy brown thin hair reached to his shoulders, moving swiftly as he walked. His gleaming eyes never stood still, always looking for someone to punish. On his wrinkly old face pranked a thin, pointy nose, which he used dog-like to sniff out trouble. If he ever spoke his rotten, yellow, partly chipped off teeth would show and a fowl smell would come out of his mouth. He always wore the same shaggy old coat full of holes and nearly fully ripped up. Some ancient brown leather boots covered his feet with loosely tied up laces. His bony hands covered in shrivelled skin like dried fruit were holding a rusty lantern with dim light. The only creature he ever smiled at was his ginger cat with scruffy fur, following him everywhere he went.
ReplyDeleteShe has long scruffy grey hair that hangs over her right shoulder she has wide green eyes. If she spoke her front crooked, yellow, chipped teeth showed. You could never see her ears because they were so small but you could always see her long ear rings swaying in the breeze. She is 80 years old, has a mole on her chin and is wrinkly. Her old brown dress was clean. There are three black buttons on the dress, it goes down to her ankles and is torn at the bottom. She doesn’t wear shoes. She has very pale skin and is fat. She is quite short and has unusual long arms.
ReplyDeleteThis guy has blonde hair just past his chin. His eyes are blue with green around them. He is part snake and part human. The shirt he is wearing is light blue with a green “S” on it. On this waist he wears a beat, it is gold and red. His pants he is wearing has green camo print down to his ankle. The shoes he wears are black Nike shoes. On this right arm has a red heart with an arrow threw it.
ReplyDeleteBy the way this guy is made up but he has a name.
His carefully styled brown hair brushed across his face in the breeze. Wide, chocolate brown eyes were rimmed with long, dark eyelashes. When he smiled menacingly, you could see his pearly white fangs. He wore a black, lengthy cloak that went down to his feet and on his feet he wore bright pink high heels. He had on fluorescent green socks that went up to his knees. Underneath his cloak he was wearing washed out denim mini shorts and a sunset orange tshirt. The tshirt had dark blue fringe hanging off of it.
ReplyDeleteHe has black curly hair and brown eyes he also has bushy eyebrows, a long nose and pale lips. He wears a brown cloak but underneath that is a dark green shirt that has buttons that go down to the middle of his shirt. A pin in the shape of a circle holds his cloak up. He has a quiver of arrows strapped around his back. The strap goes over his left shoulder and under his right arm. He carries in his hand a bow in the shape of an M .he wears a belt that holds his miniature sword and hunting knife he also wears dark green pants. Is a ranger and the outfit he wears is part of his camouflage
ReplyDeleteHe has a green and yellow friend. The green one is a girl and the yellow one is a boy and he wears a tutu. He makes new friends every day and is a children’s favourite! He also teaches life lessons every day. He has a grassy green stomach and is purple the rest of his body. He also doesn’t wear any clothes.
ReplyDeletethis fat,over sized KFC eating man has a round stomach like a exercise ball. The fat man has yellow hair as bright as the sun. Mr KFCs nose is as long as a carrot and his skin is as light as paper. He always wears black clothes with dark framed sunglasses.
ReplyDeleteThis character comes from a movie, that was based on a book.
ReplyDeleteHe strongly resembles a pig, with his pug nose, his little ears and even his size. His straight, brown hair is usually sticky from the amount of chocolate that he eats. Chocolate is his favourite food. He loves everything chocolate, chocolate ice-cream, chocolate biscuits, chocolate cake, chocolate milk, chocolate bars, just anything chocolate! Ironically a chocolate rive was the cause of his - almost - death.
He is an only child and his parents spoil him heaps. If he doesn't get his own way he has a massive tantrum, and acts lots younger than his actual age.
He once met the person who made his favourite chocolate bars.
the tall, thin womnan with long blonde curly hair walked along the sidewalk. her young pretty face was framed with flawless golden hair cascading over her left shoulder almost reaching her waist. her choice of clothing for the day included black jeans and a black t shirt reaching almost her knees, her pale face protected by a cap that was pulled over her eyes.
ReplyDeleteHe is an outgoing Canada singer who adores purple, He also love to wear purple and as he is walking along the hallway he is wearing a purple beanie that has a Green microphone on it.my character has dark green/brownish eyes. This person however has sparkling white teeth. He has one tiny nose and his ears are very over sized.
ReplyDeleteHe takes up two sports, takes punches and tackles and is real ripped and got a tattoo on he’s right shoulder and has short hair with a swift comb over on top and slits also the perfect six pack that every girl craves for. Most people would relate him to Jonah lomu.
ReplyDeleteHe staggers into the doorway blindly shoving his entrails back into whats left of the gorey hole that used to resemble his stomach. His grey pinstriped trousers are ripped and covered in gore and he blindly stabs the air around him with the bloody stump he has for a left arm. His one good eye is blood shot and full of malice and his other hangs limply out of the socket connected by a single string of disease ridden flesh that swings around when he makes any sudden movements .The gurgling sound that comes from his mouth is caused by the blood, pus, vomit and saliva That spews out , staining his already blood-stained front. His hair is matted and crusty with blood and chunks are ripped out revealing the skull and rotting brain beneath. His yellow, Jagged teeth have bits of children’s flesh hanging from it. And he howls as a shove my home-made spear through his empty eye-socket.
ReplyDeleteWas he Peeter's son? Yes he was his large shiny brown eyes resembled peeter’s so much, Emmet i thought. "What’s your name lady" Emmet asked politely me poking me with his stubby fingers “Ava” I said. I pushed my blood red hair out of my face to observe him, he has his father’s structure, athletic and strong he must have his mother hair because peeter’s is a coffee brown not a sandy blond. His snow white skin was unnaturally white no-one could be that pale. Then I spotted it looked like a burn no a scar but it was neither it was a branding on the back of his neck half hidden by his uneven singed hair a single S was branded to his skin something that would never be able heal away . “Ava why are your eyes red” Emmet asked “why are your eyes brown” I asked him as I leaned down to waist height and patted his head poor little emmet I thought he’s only nine and judging by the blood stains vomit on his gown which I’m positive is just like the ones people made to wear in hospitals he’s had the worst possible childhood.
ReplyDeletewow, pretty gory stuff levi.... go the zombies!
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