The class are coming to the end of their poetry topic and there has been some excellent work done. Everyone needs to share their favourite poem. Feel free to comment on these.
five senses poem. fiordland is green it tastes like lime moosies it sounds like birds chirping it smells like rainforests it looks like a great green wall it makes me feel happy!
H uge, thunderous waterfall. E xquisite, exciting sight. L ots of slippery rocks. E nourmous waterfall. N o roads, cities and pollution. A drenilin rush as you reach the waterfall
F lawless A mazing view L and of the lost L ong walk to reach the falls S izzling hot sun streaming down on me.
Fire is orange It tastes like burnt toast It sounds like the roars of lions It smells like charcoal filled smoke It looks like animals running from destruction It makes me feel wonderstruck
the mountaian rocks rored down the hill. the sand flies were dangeriouse tigers. the wekas were spies in the bush. the waterfalls were giants. the food was heaven
Colour poem-green Green is what you see at Deep Cove It is the colour of tree leaves It is the colour of grass Green is the colour the sun and the water make when they meet it smells like the native plants and the dirt mixing It tastes like the green kiwi camouflage icecream that you eat Green sounds like the bushes rustling in the wind It looke like the clour if the tree leeaves It feels like the rough ;eaves of trees Green makes me happy to know that the Deoartment of Canservation is actually doing some good Green is the colour of Deep Cove
Five senses poem Winter is blue It tastes like hot chocolate It sounds like snowballs crashing against walls It smells like burning fire It looks like puffy jackets It makes me feel cold
five senses poem.
ReplyDeletefiordland is green
it tastes like lime moosies
it sounds like birds chirping
it smells like rainforests
it looks like a great green wall
it makes me feel happy!
BY GAVIN SNYMAN
Funny
ReplyDeleteA-wesome Anndy act’s
B-eautiful berry buy’s
C-aring corrie climbs
D-umb dob drools
E-nourmous elephant
F-erocious fish fart
G-eougeous georgia giggles
H-appy harry hidd’s
I-nterseting Imogen imitates.
J-oking Jessica jokes
K-idding kesiha kinds
L-aughing lena laugh’s
M-ajestic marry mines
N-osy nonius neighs
O-range octopuss overbakes
P-itch peter plays
Q-uotidian queen quoth
R-edeeming rile rides
S-ighted simmon slides
T-all teddy talks
U- sed umbrella unicycling
V-ictorious Vilion Void
W-holesome worm walking
X-rated xylophone exterminates
Y-awing yoyo yawns
Z-oo zebra zolo
Fishing Haiku
ReplyDeleteOne minute dingy,
Millions of fish to catch,
The deadly ocean.
Cinquain
ReplyDeleteGypsy
is my kitten
she is cute and fluffy
she is black, white and yellow
fluffy.
Helena Falls - Acrostic Poem
ReplyDeleteH uge, thunderous waterfall.
E xquisite, exciting sight.
L ots of slippery rocks.
E nourmous waterfall.
N o roads, cities and pollution.
A drenilin rush as you reach the waterfall
F lawless
A mazing view
L and of the lost
L ong walk to reach the falls
S izzling hot sun streaming down on me.
By Ella
Acrostic Poem - Deep Cove
ReplyDeleteD olphins swimming beside the boat.
E aten alive by sandflys.
E xtraordinary scenery, Walks and fish.
P owerfall waterfalls that can blow you of your feet.
C atching fish on the boats and wharf.
O ver the Wilmot pass to Deep Cove.
V arying plants everywhere and anywhere.
E xciting to see wildlife you don’t see everyday.
By Jessica M
FIVE SENSES-FIRE
ReplyDeleteFire is orange
It tastes like burnt toast
It sounds like the roars of lions
It smells like charcoal filled smoke
It looks like animals running from destruction
It makes me feel wonderstruck
D aring challenging new things to try.
ReplyDeleteE xciting things to do.
E xceptional food ://
P arents there to help you on the hikes.
C olourful and beautiful scenery.
O n the boat cruise seeing dolphins.
V ery nearly always raining.
E normous waterfalls to try and climb.
LAVA CINQUAIN
ReplyDeleteFiery
Super hot
Melting everything
Devouring all villages
Around
Deep Cove Cinquain
ReplyDeleteDeep Cove
Beautiful place
Amazing scenery
An awesome place to go visit
Nature
Maths
ReplyDeleteLines graphs
Ruler pencil page
Quiet hot stuffy classroom
Statistics
deep cove metephor.
ReplyDeletethe mountaian rocks rored down the hill.
the sand flies were dangeriouse tigers.
the wekas were spies in the bush.
the waterfalls were giants.
the food was heaven
wind
ReplyDeletewind tasts like blue berrys
it sounds like a storm
it smells like clean clothes
it looks like fast movement
it makes me feel alive
SWIMMING CINQUAIN
ReplyDeleteSwimming
BOOM goes the gun
Try out the butterfly
Competing in swimming races
I won
Colour poem-green
ReplyDeleteGreen is what you see at Deep Cove
It is the colour of tree leaves
It is the colour of grass
Green is the colour the sun and the water make when they meet
it smells like the native plants and the dirt mixing
It tastes like the green kiwi camouflage icecream that you eat
Green sounds like the bushes rustling in the wind
It looke like the clour if the tree leeaves
It feels like the rough ;eaves of trees
Green makes me happy to know that the Deoartment of Canservation is actually doing some good
Green is the colour of Deep Cove
Emo
ReplyDeleteLife in darkness
gloomy enfolding
misundertood, solitary
we die
fishes in the water
ReplyDeletefishes flapping out of water
fishes
fish swimming around
ReplyDeletethat lovely fishy smell
Catching lots of fish
Five senses poem
ReplyDeleteWinter is blue
It tastes like hot chocolate
It sounds like snowballs crashing against walls
It smells like burning fire
It looks like puffy jackets
It makes me feel cold
WHO:the hostel weka
ReplyDeleteWHAT:pecking the ground
WHEN:Always
WHERE:outside the deep cove hostel
WHY:looking for bugs